I had asked The knife,
‘Knife, Do you stab?!
Would you make someone Bleed?
Would you someone nab?”
And it had told me!
Told me in so many words! :
‘I only cut and chop and slice;
Make sure that no one hurts!’
‘But they say you’re the stabbing knife,
They say you dig them scars!’
Indignant, it revolted, ‘Such Lies!
I swear upon the stars!’
Oh, I’m no simple table-spoon, nor your fancy fork,
I admit I’ll cut to size, every wrongful dork’
“’Cut to size’, Knife?”, I repeated;
“And what really does that mean?
Could you draw blood, with your blade?!,
Or keep it nice and clean!?”
I try to recall what it had said;
I THINK it swore upon it’s blade,
That it had never tasted blood,
Never on human flesh it laid …
And with that, I was at peace.
It was just nice to know-
This was really no ‘stabbing’ knife,
It would not sink that low!
And there are other knives,
They seemed to be the same,
I took their word for what it said,
And not for noises lame ..!
And I write this, broken somewhere,
Coz The Knife DOES aim to kill;
How sure I was, that it DID not!
Now, ALL knives could fit the bill!
Maybe they’ll shine their blades one day.
Just like The knife, that lied.
I sit and stare and wait now;
I have sat alone and cried.
5 comments:
:(...my comment got wiped off,,i wrote it...(this net connectin :X).As i pressed publish it went off:(..let me try once more..it certainly is nt an easy thing to reinvent...
,,ok,, ,u wrote an insightful poem,,,and with sm hidden meaning,,and i know its the intellectual property of the writer:)
I usually got poor marks while in school and when my question in English literature ws related to writing "from reference to context" about a poem from the coures...i usually got bad marks,,so i m bad at it..
There is one ambiguity though from ur line "And I write this, ... How sure I was, that it DID not!" 1. either the knife has stabbed u (of course not literally),,OR 2. u believe that all knives are same nd they stab...
Best justice to ur poem can be done by my sis,, Megs..
Keep blogging...
hey ... m not sure it's "insightful" or anything! .. but i know the meaning it has for me ... and i know that noone else can obviously understand it .. coz i alone know the context :( ...
and oh, The Knife has not stabbed ME at all (on the contrary... it has been quite the opposite with me)!... but it stabs people ..
u know? .. and it's painfully disgusting to watch it on play.. n I doubt my sense of judgment now.. .. and .. well I cud go on ... but
*sigh* .. I really have no words ...
Loved the peom, esp since the 'chamach' was conversing with the knife.
To be honest, when i started off reading the poem i had imagined a different end/ conclusion/ underlying theme to this...which would be that knifes dont kill people; people kill people!
Butttt... having read this again and again (i think the count reads 15 times as of now), i realise the pain this knife has caused you.
And there is nothing more i can say... But just one thing more..
after having read sumeets comment and your reply to it i derived out one thing...
**
Please dont be offended when i say YOU here, using it veryyyy loosely to define a lot of people- including HRH herself.
**
The knife never hurt you, but those around you. That saddens you, yes...but it would also caution you, and make you judge your own judgement of why and how did i let such a person/thing be a friend to me.
For, A wrong is a wrong and there exists no grey area for it.
I Learned this the hard way. :-/
Cheers, keep posting, hope none of the foll posts bring you such pain and melachony. 'Cos that is kind of my territory... lol ... :D
:D lolz... trust u to point out that the convo was between the Chammach and the Knife (even I'd never realised!)
PS. I know we KNOW that I & YOU are illustrative in our discussions.. :)
.. about the knife .. well, m glad that I never let it be a "friend" really, coz I was never dead sure about it .. but didnt wish to be unfair to it either! [the same principle that I apply to all by default: innocent until proven guilty ] .. but what has stirred me is that it has turned out to be what it gave its word it was NOT. And people's words are what I count on! There is no question that I would look at a knife with respect/ consideration once its KNIFE status is evident to me. But the problem is that DESPITE all my deep analysis, etc etc .. I had come to the incorrect conclusion .. which means that I might make the same mistake with other knives .. :( .. and I realized that little can be done about it ..
The good thing is that I never accorded this knife the status of a friend - coz I was not SURE. But the sad part is, I was sure that it was NOT a knife. Which was false. And I was so sure about that. And if I still go back in time, all rational evidence would still support it! :(
I mean, it's questioning a very fundamental premise of all my logic of analysis and interpretation...[and i dont have any other model to follow, coz I have the arrogance to think that the one that everyone else does has ten times more flaws :(]
gosh i dunno how to say this .. maybe al give this topic a CLOSURE :)
and hey, Happy Friendship Day to all of us :) :) .. who know what it truly means ...
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